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Will Brach's avatar

I loved reading this, and agree with your writing. Regarding societies collective consciousness, I believe there are two ways in which this concept will progress. One avenue will be an increased centralization of the collective consciousness, in which people will get all of their information from social media. The other, as you alluded too, will be the percentage of the population who choose to read longer articles, listen to longer podcasts regarding issues, and form more evaluated opinions. I worry that the people who would choose to read a piece like yours are fading away from the collective consciousness. Shorter attention spans are becoming a problem in the modern world, and the issue will only increase. I can't wait to share your work with my friends, I really enjoyed this piece.

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Sophie's avatar

"Yet, while we should be sad about the negative aspects of humanity that are present, we should allow optimism of the future to spur us along the path of societal transformation." is a fire bar.

My critique is climate change does not just pose the threat of extinction but erasing a lot of the progress you highlighted - it does and will continue to decrease food security, increase displacement, and other things that lead to societal unrest. We need to use optimism about what we have achieved to spur big transformational change to address climate change.

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